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gr4ph-kill3R
16-06-2010, 11:27 PM
Defense Of the Anciens Episode 01 part 01 & 02 : Rylai mission. i'm working in the following parts! enjoy ! Rate & comment ! * I accept any suggestions !


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Cnacnel
16-06-2010, 11:44 PM
Imo needs proofreading.
gr4ph-kill3R
17-06-2010, 12:05 AM
Imo needs proofreading.

i didn't understand want you want to tell me :s

proofreading mean ?
Cnacnel
17-06-2010, 02:08 AM
i didn't understand want you want to tell me :s

proofreading mean ?

dictionary.com
gr4ph-kill3R
17-06-2010, 10:23 AM
ok thanks for the information i will do that in the next part ;)
gr4ph-kill3R
17-06-2010, 11:08 PM
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs050.ash2/35840_1478603682127_1144823924_2451922_5679586_n.j pg
Cnacnel
17-06-2010, 11:11 PM
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/proofreading
my_name_is_8D
17-06-2010, 11:48 PM
Thats nice^^
gr4ph-kill3R
18-06-2010, 12:42 AM
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/proofreading

can you help me to improve my work and correct it because i don't see my mistakes xD
gr4ph-kill3R
18-06-2010, 04:02 PM
i told you , he ment that YOu need a Spider-pig to be in your works beside having a crow :)

xD spider pig is too big to fit in my images xD

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